Meri Saans Bikherne Wali Ho Gi - Sad Poetry

WELL..it is good to read your this literary piece, i found little bit illusion in it, but over all it is remarkable. the last line no doubt shakes you and abducted your attention but some of lexicon are subsided to showcase you deep feelings, when i feel like enjoying it got finished therefore it made me think that it should have been little lengthy. well i hope you will take my comments positively. at the i would like to appreciate your title, it has quality to tempt the reader to grill it. Best of Luck for your next poetry stuff.